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author | Bjørn Forsman <bjorn.forsman@gmail.com> | 2014-08-24 16:21:08 +0200 |
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committer | Bjørn Forsman <bjorn.forsman@gmail.com> | 2014-08-24 22:31:37 +0200 |
commit | c9baba9212feb6e39151118647d45b34b029a6df (patch) | |
tree | 48dc0df228a071cc5639fe51bfce55d621a3a8f1 /pkgs/games/construo | |
parent | 2a6c7e2874a3ada9b1c544db61402e03091556db (diff) |
Fix many package descriptions
(My OCD kicked in today...)
Remove repeated package names, capitalize first word, remove trailing
periods and move overlong descriptions to longDescription.
I also simplified some descriptions as well, when they were particularly
long or technical, often based on Arch Linux' package descriptions.
I've tried to stay away from generated expressions (and I think I
succeeded).
Some specifics worth mentioning:
* cron, has "Vixie Cron" in its description. The "Vixie" part is not
mentioned anywhere else. I kept it in a parenthesis at the end of the
description.
* ctags description started with "Exuberant Ctags ...", and the
"exuberant" part is not mentioned elsewhere. Kept it in a parenthesis
at the end of description.
* nix has the description "The Nix Deployment System". Since that
doesn't really say much what it is/does (especially after removing
the package name!), I changed that to "Powerful package manager that
makes package management reliable and reproducible" (borrowed from
nixos.org).
* Tons of "GNU Foo, Foo is a [the important bits]" descriptions
is changed to just [the important bits]. If the package name doesn't
contain GNU I don't think it's needed to say it in the description
either.
Diffstat (limited to 'pkgs/games/construo')
-rw-r--r-- | pkgs/games/construo/default.nix | 2 |
1 files changed, 1 insertions, 1 deletions
diff --git a/pkgs/games/construo/default.nix b/pkgs/games/construo/default.nix index 57d055ed3d3d..f94b489908eb 100644 --- a/pkgs/games/construo/default.nix +++ b/pkgs/games/construo/default.nix @@ -24,6 +24,6 @@ stdenv.mkDerivation rec { builder = writeScript (name + "-builder") (textClosure localDefs ["preConfigure" "doConfigure" "doMakeInstall" "doForceShare" "doPropagate"]); meta = { - description = "Construo masses and springs simulation"; + description = "Masses and springs simulation game"; }; } |